Below are links to several sample essays that are responses to previous questions found for the Independent Writing Task section of the TOEFL. You can study these sample essays to help improve your own writing. Note the vocabulary used, the variety of sentence structure, and the overall logical flow of each essay. The essays are paired, so that you can see how the same question can be answered in different ways.
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Sample "Super" Essays
1. Class Attendance is Essential "...participating in class can also grow another vital asset..."
2. The Need for a Flexible Class Attendance Policy "...doing so could actually enhance student academic achievement."
3. Growing Up in the Countryside " Such life lessons can help children become more responsible..."
4. Growing Up in the City "....I got to learn about many cultures and develop skills..."
5. My Ideal Co-worker "....how beneficial it is to work with someone who can clearly and precisely explain..."
6. My Dream Co-worker "....I really appreciate in a co-worker is a positive attitude."
7. Living in the Fast Lane "...I want to spend my waking hours improving the world..."
8. Taking it Slow "....I can really savor each moment."
